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Yesterday, life seemed to be going
In every direction
With many up and downs
Still to be considered perfection

No thoughts of growing up
Only had you in my vision
No responsibility or worries
About making a bad decision

It was so perfect..wasn't it?
Just laying in the grass
Holding on to your hand
Just watching the days pass

Yesterday was magical
There was happiness and bliss
Only breaking silence
When we gasped after a kiss

We never needed words
Everything could be felt with just a touch
The caressing of your skin
Told you I needed you so much

Was yesterday prefect only for me?
Was I enjoying it by myself?
Tell me why did I have to catch you
Sleeping with somebody else

Giving him that smile
Lipstick painting your lips red
Did you forget all about us
As you slid into his bed?

Yesterday is long gone
Today is filled with much remorse
I tried to numb the pain with liquor
But it seemed to only make it worse

Today is filled with memories
That I wish I could forget
Every second spent together
Throw away the day we met

Yesterday holds so much happiness
That today has turned to pain
Butterflies now turn to heartache
When I come across your name

Time can cure the sadness
Has numbed most of the pain away
But it can't take away the precious
Memories of yesterday

I will always feel something
Here, In my heart, in some way
But I no longer love you
Like I loved you yesterday
Newest Poem
It sort of just came to me as i laid to fall to sleep
sorry if it sucks
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol omg cheating? how terrible.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
I know right
stupid cheaters!
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
I love this and what do you mean sorry if it sucks? it doesn;t!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
I wasnt very confident about it
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Writer
you have a gift and it's good to share it
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
i wonder about that,.
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student Writer
i know it's true
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TheLionAndTheFish Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
'sorry if it sucks', are you mad?!
This is amazing!
Reminded me of Yesterday by The Beatles, which is not really surprising I guess.
But anyway, this really touched me.
It reminds me of the heartache I've been going through; knowing the person you love(d) is with someone else hurts... Much.
I think the last stanza's great; it shows you're moving on.
Something I'm trying to do as well, but still there will be this one piece of my heart that will always have feelings for him, no matter how hard I try to get over him.

Ok, long story short: amazing poem. Faved, of course.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well...I wrote this as i laid in bed..half asleep...lol
it sort of jsut came to me..
and i posted it like that...So I wasn't sure if it was any good..as i was half dead.
And I'm Glad that my poetry has once again touched u :)
and that u like it.
btw...Even though i love that Beatles song...this was inspired by a song called "I dont Love you" by My Chemical Romance.

And I know how it feels to need to move on and being unable to :/
it sucks.

and thanks for the favorite :)
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GuineaGirl106 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful ^^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much
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GuineaGirl106 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it means a lot little one :)
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Ninefiftin Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Yesterday was magical
There was happiness and bliss
Only breaking silence
When we gasped after a kiss

We never needed words
Everything could be felt with just a touch
The caressing of your skin
Told you I needed you so much"

:heart:

"Butterflies now turn to heartache
When I come across your name"

THIS IS SO TRUE.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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starnoyume Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
The human heart is a mystery, indeed.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed...
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Tigueron Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is something I could relate to years ago. Great stuff!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh man,,,that sucks.
I actually havent gone through it..
But thanks for liking my poem.
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, you never cease to amaze me with your talent
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Meh...you're just too nice :)
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah bro, you're just really great with your writing.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot little one :)
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime, bro
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol...you love saying that huh
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*shrug*
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TheGoatstealer Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, youre sooo amazing!! :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u very much :)
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TheGoatstealer Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Nariko386 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have such a talent for conveying emotion and touching people on a personal level, and the last line was so profound. I loved it.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u very much :)
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Nariko386 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like this a lot.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Writer
It's pretty good, and gets the emotion across.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
it kinda hit me before i slept..so it might have some errors..lol
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Writer
=D Welcome.
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ALIBI13 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Artist
It's great!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u :)
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ALIBI13 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Artist
you're welcome--
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