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I woke up today..and I felt the warmth of your body
And the breathes you exhaled where all landing on me
And the weight of your body...as you laid on my chest
I've had good mornings....but I'll confess... today was the best

All night while we slept...I held you in my arms
I was telling myself..I was protecting you from everything that harms
But it was an excuse ...I just wanted you Near
While you slept ..whisper in your ear....that you're what my heart holds most dear

And its only been a few months...and I can't picture my life without you
In such a short time..we both grew so much because of all we've been through
You gave my life purpose...and soon became more important than water
This is just a poem to tell you that I love you...my beautiful daughter
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Waking up to You by IINegativeII

/ / / ©2012-2015 IINegativeII
Someone Wanted me to write a happy poem.
This was kinda ...the first thing that came to mind.

I know everyone will wonder If I have a daughter. lol
U could say i have...an Adoptive Daughter ;P
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Ihavemyreasons99 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
THE ADOPTIVE DAUGHTER IS ANNA! :O
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No...its not.
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Ihavemyreasons99 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
oh... :(
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Chibi--Chick Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
I like the happy poem <3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well..Im really glad U liked it :)
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Chibi--Chick Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
No problem!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
means more than u think :)
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Chibi--Chick Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Why is that?
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
because my art is very important to me :)
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Chibi--Chick Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Well i'm glad that I could help :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad u could help too ;P
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KatieTheKat Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
dude. YOU CAN WRITE HAPPY! Congrats. And you thought you couldn't. DORK. Muy Bien!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
Well thanks a lot :)
Im glad u like it.
havent heard form u in forever.!
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KatieTheKat Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
I know it's been awhile!
You had a kid ;P (jk I read the little footnote)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
maybe i did ;P
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KatieTheKat Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Well you'd make a good dad so I'm not to worried haha maybe a little soon but that's okay hahahaha
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
how do u know i would?
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KatieTheKat Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Idk good parental vibe haha idk I just think you would
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
thanks..i guess.. :)
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monochromera Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
this is the cutest poem ever :heart: it's lovely beyond measure, if I ever have a daughter, I will sing this to her every night <3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn :blush:
hank u very much
Im glad u like it :)
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monochromera Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
np :3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank *
i cant even spell right now >_> lol
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monochromera Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
I have made worse typos before lol
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
ok then
i dont feel so stupid now ;P
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monochromera Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
:D
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Photographer
Oh.
This is spectacular! I love it. I really do, and the way you described all the emotions with such warmth and love....you DID VERY WELL!!!! :jawdrop:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u :)
Im glad u liked it

when u asked me to do a happy poem....i had to think of what made me happiest
then it was easy :)
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Photographer
Well you suprised me in a such a positive way!
You can't even imagine how proud I am! :aww:

See, you can do a happy stuff too!
Just don't be afraid and belive in yourself! :tighthug:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well Im glad :)
its a good thing i made u proud :3


haha
i can
i guess
but sad is so much easier >_> lol
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Photographer
But now you proved to you that you can do it, just saying!!!!
I was right! :aww:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well..just dont ask me for happy again ;P
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Photographer
Can you do one more? :D
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
about what? lol
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ArtsMermaid Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
AWWWWWWWW :huggle:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
like it? :)
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ArtsMermaid Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
:nod:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
good :)
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ArtsMermaid Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
:D
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decayingcherrytree Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, that's really sweet.
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decayingcherrytree Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, that's really sweet.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad u like it :)
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decayingcherrytree Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Omg a happy one? And you know what I love it very heartfelt & filled with emotion. It brought a smile to my face & reminded me how much I love my own daughter. So thanks for sharing its beautiful. :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah
I had to write a happy one...because i never do >_>
Im really glad u like it :)
it means a lot.
thank u.
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That I did. No problem man. :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
Im glad...u felt a connection to it :)
with your daughter thing..and all
I dont have a child..so i didn't know if I would fail at it..or not
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My daughter thing? :) Lol. Her names Arianna. You don't have to have a child to know feelings. You did it well so no you didn't fail
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh
cute name :)
and i wanted the feelings of having a daughter to be displayed and i dont have a child
so i didnt know if i failed at it.
so yeah
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