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I'm tired of hearing
"Its not the end of the world"
That I need to cheer up
That "she's only a girl"
But these people don't know
That I've tried to move on
But these feelings won't go
I don't like faking a smile
With every "Hello"
But goodbyes are the worst
Every time I feel like I'm cursed
I know that I overreacted
When you said that I wasn't your first
But you lied
And that's when I realized
That what I thought was divine
For you was just another time
Inside It felt like I'd die
I was enraged and I cried
But now that I've lost you
I'd die to again say that you're mine
So please  look at me now
Say that we'll make it somehow
That you'll love me with all
that your heart will allow
Please say you'll come  back
That we'll get back on track
That you'll come to me
Before my heart completely turns black
Just another poem.
not my best..i know.
but better than nothing....right?
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
..............Oh my gosh......I really am a terrible person.



Manny :( *sighs* I think......this calls for a response poem.
Even if this isn't about me haha but I think it still calls for a response poem.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A response poem?
Ehh...that would be interesting..

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno if that'd be appropriate lol.

Maybe I won't....only will if you want me to.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well u need to be more active
and i love ur poetry
so i say u should.

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
UGHHHHH I'm so lazy, I was hoping you'd say don't do it lol
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no way
get off ur lazy ass

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll do it later.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok
I'll be waiting :)
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Writer
I understand these feelings... people say you will find someone else, but you still want him/her you know? It's true that you get over these feelings. I love how your poems are so relatable! keep it up!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much love c:
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student Writer
anytime!
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TheGoatstealer Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE THIS
ITS AMAZING
I already told you this
but YEAH
AWESOMENESS
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
lol
Im glad u like it
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TheGoatstealer Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i do!! :D
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a new poem on here..if u are interested
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TheGoatstealer Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very depressing. nice
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is it that depressing?
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TheGoatstealer Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
kinda
but its beautiful lol as always :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you always think they are beautiful and depressing
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's absolutely amazing.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:O
U really think so? :)
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot :)
u make me smile. lol
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FacePaintInRhyme Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad ^u^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad as well..
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Something is better then nothing I like it.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Writer
So much better than nothing =) It's wonderful.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u very much
not very confident about these new pieces.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome
It's alright, you're still getting back into the groove of writing ^^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess so
its so hard..to come up with ideas now a days :/
its no fun.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Take a break. Writing is not meant to be a chore nor something you should have to do.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well i already came up with something that idk if i am satisfied with.
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Writer
That's good though =D
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i guess so :c
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
purty XD
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it?
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep. I like it.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Im glad :)
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont have many ideas for poems now a days :/
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just made one. ^~^ *shot*
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what did u make?
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