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I'm tired of hearing
"Its not the end of the world"
That I need to cheer up
That "she's only a girl"
But these people don't know
That I've tried to move on
But these feelings won't go
I don't like faking a smile
With every "Hello"
But goodbyes are the worst
Every time I feel like I'm cursed
I know that I overreacted
When you said that I wasn't your first
But you lied
And that's when I realized
That what I thought was divine
For you was just another time
Inside It felt like I'd die
I was enraged and I cried
But now that I've lost you
I'd die to again say that you're mine
So please  look at me now
Say that we'll make it somehow
That you'll love me with all
that your heart will allow
Please say you'll come  back
That we'll get back on track
That you'll come to me
Before my heart completely turns black
Just another poem.
not my best..i know.
but better than nothing....right?
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
..............Oh my gosh......I really am a terrible person.



Manny :( *sighs* I think......this calls for a response poem.
Even if this isn't about me haha but I think it still calls for a response poem.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A response poem?
Ehh...that would be interesting..

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno if that'd be appropriate lol.

Maybe I won't....only will if you want me to.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well u need to be more active
and i love ur poetry
so i say u should.

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
UGHHHHH I'm so lazy, I was hoping you'd say don't do it lol
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no way
get off ur lazy ass

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll do it later.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok
I'll be waiting :)
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Writer
I understand these feelings... people say you will find someone else, but you still want him/her you know? It's true that you get over these feelings. I love how your poems are so relatable! keep it up!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much love c:
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