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There were times I wished that I
Could Start my life again
And correct all the mistakes
That led me to this place
Times I wish that I
could take a different road
But all that disappeared
The first time I saw your face

I'm not one that believes in love at first sight
But I swear I felt it that night
Just put your hand in my chest
And feel for yourself,
Or believe the look in my eyes

That night I knew I found
What I needed all along
I was chained to the ground
But I finally felt that I belonged
Because In you I saw
Where I was meant to be
I was lost in awe
And knew you were the one for me

Because I found my Paradise
When I looked into your eyes
And I felt at home
First time I felt Alive

There were times I felt no peace
All I knew about was pain
But I knew one day all that would pass
I was going through a phase
I'm glad I survived and
I'm thankful that I'm here
my demons disappeared
My life is just starting to amaze

I'm not one that believes in love at first sight
But I swear I feel it tonight
Just put your hand in my chest
And feel for yourself,
Or believe this look in my eyes

That night I knew I found
What I needed all along
I was chained to the ground
But I finally felt that I belonged
Because In you I saw
Where I was meant to be
I was lost in awe
And knew you were the one for me

Because I found my Paradise
When I looked into your eyes
And I felt at home
And I felt Alive
I found my Paradise
When I looked into your eyes
trying new things
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DragonEyeInfinity Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
haha. I thought this is a song. ;p

Sing this, please..! ^_^ (just kidding!)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
no way
no one gets to hear me sing 
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DragonEyeInfinity Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
well, I insist! ;p

I want to hear you singing.. Try me! ^_^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bahaha
no way
I dont sing for anyone
Sorry ;P

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DragonEyeInfinity Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hahahah
I'm not anyone..! I'm your friend. so, could you sing for me. :D (sing, sing, singggg!) :devil:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
I wouldnt even sing for a lover (if i had one)

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DragonEyeInfinity Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yay! why not..?

If you can't or don't sing, you can't capture their heart. Believe me! :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
nah...i rather read her a verse 
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:happybounce: Ohmygosh! Ohmygosh! That's sooo good! 
You should seriously get that turned into a song. :D (Big Grin) 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
REally?
U think its that good? ;P
I shall try and make it into a song :3 
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You definitely should. I'd like to hear it in song form. =3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll see what i can do :)
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just dont expect much...or it to happen soon. lol
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha =3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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crystalkitten1682 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
not 100% sure why, but it reads like lyrics to me
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thats because they were meant to be..lol
but Im no good at writing songs.
 
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crystalkitten1682 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
i think it's pretty good :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well thank u very much ;3 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinloveplz: 
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Writer
That's a sweet love poem ^^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u very much :)
I wasn't sure if it was too cheesy ;P

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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student Writer
XD You're welcome
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
:)
U are always too nice :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Writer
Psh, I'm the perfect amount of niceness ;p
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Indeed ;P

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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student Writer
:giggle:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I already forgot the topic of this conversation >_> lol

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