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I wonder what
Your first thought is
In the morning
When you wake up
Do you think about
A certain boy
Or the way you'll
Do your makeup

Or better yet
What's the last thing
That crosses your mind
When you're done
With your day
And you turn in
For the Night

You seem to be
All I can think about lately
I can't get you off my head
And it's driving me crazy
And I can't read you at all
You feel so far away
If I asked you to be with me
I wonder what you'd say

If I...
Close my eyes
and let the world
around me vanish
To make a wish
For you to be with me
Would it be childish
I can't think
Of a better wish
To deal with anguish
Lets get rid of this distance
that loves to punish
First of all..the tittle is mean to be similar to that funny movie "Not Another Teen Move.."
and second..I wrote this poem because I've had writer's block..and haven't been able to write
So I wanted to at least get something out there
Sorry if the poem isn't good T_T
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Photographer
Perfection.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, really now?
thank u

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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Photographer
Like u can see, I wasn't really on Da much, and now when I read all of them... I must said I'm impressed, u are getting better with every work u make Manny.
I'm proud! :aww:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha..
i dont know about that.
I just..Ive been writing here and there
but thanks.
did u really read all of them or just the newest ones?

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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Photographer
I think I did read all of them, but I might skip on some of the... But I don't think I did.
I had them all in my inbox
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh . Thank you then
I always like to hear your opinion
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Photographer
You know it's my pleasure, always!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good ;P
lol
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luka567 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
What an amazing poem :O
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u very much!
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