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I'll confess...I'm not Strong
I breakdown every time I hear our song.
And I know that I was wrong
I couldn't prove to them that we Belong

Yeah..I'll confess
That I fucked up...I'm a Mess
There's no words  that could help me express
That this heart's filled with distress

But what can I do..If I no longer have you
Even if I beg to your god..the past isn't something that I can Undo
And I wish, from the start...that I knew
That I was a sky....that was loosing its blue

Who would have known that I'd be so empty.
that there was so many things that could easily tempt me
think back to what was wrong with us..I'm sure you'll think of Plenty
I don't believe in god...but I know you're the last angel that he'll send me
Lovie
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Genisay Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It sounds like song lyrics. I was tempted to try and sing it, but I'm not very good at dreaming up tunes for things.

If you were to put a music style to it, what kind would you pick?
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, you did it anyway....lol
Thank you..!

Haha, I dont think Im very good at making songs.

but If I did it would be a rock song of course.
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Genisay Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm.......*thinks* Rock is one of the genres I know the best! I grew up pretty much on Rock, Country, and Pop, but I also love Techno, Trance, Alternative, Fantasy Metal, Power Metal and Classical, with some Rap (there are a few unique rappers out there that I respect...far too many all sound the same though).  Haha, it's probably easier for me to figure out what music I don't like then to list all of the ones I do.  I just like music as long as it's got a good beat, tells a story, makes you feel something deep down inside.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I see. The music that I am into is post-hardcore and metalcore rock. Its more commonly referred to as screamo.
I do listen to other types of rock of course, I love classic rock so my music ranges from Queen to Guns N Roses to Metallica To Korn and Falling in Reverse To UnderOath.
There is so much in rock that is great

So when you ask about this poem and what kind of music it would go to...its kind of hard to say
Maybe a combination  of my favorites.
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Darkpoet123 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damn, your last angel was a lucky one :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u very much..
though i dont know whats so lucky about feeling pain..lol
regardless....thank u for the favorite and the watch 
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Darkpoet123 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nooo, I meant that she was lucky enough to have you :)
and no prob, thanks for the watch back ^^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im not sure, that would be considered lucky...lol
u are very welcome :)
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Darkpoet123 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD and thanks :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i really appreciate u liking my witing
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