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I'll confess...I'm not Strong
I breakdown every time I hear our song.
And I know that I was wrong
I couldn't prove to them that we Belong

Yeah..I'll confess
That I fucked up...I'm a Mess
There's no words  that could help me express
That this heart's filled with distress

But what can I do..If I no longer have you
Even if I beg to your god..the past isn't something that I can Undo
And I wish, from the start...that I knew
That I was a sky....that was loosing its blue

Who would have known that I'd be so empty.
that there was so many things that could easily tempt me
think back to what was wrong with us..I'm sure you'll think of Plenty
I don't believe in god...but I know you're the last angel that he'll send me
Lovie
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Darkpoet123 Mar 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damn, your last angel was a lucky one :)
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IINegativeII Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u very much..
though i dont know whats so lucky about feeling pain..lol
regardless....thank u for the favorite and the watch 
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Darkpoet123 Mar 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nooo, I meant that she was lucky enough to have you :)
and no prob, thanks for the watch back ^^
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IINegativeII Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Im not sure, that would be considered lucky...lol
u are very welcome :)
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Darkpoet123 Mar 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD and thanks :)
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IINegativeII Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i really appreciate u liking my witing
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Darkpoet123 Mar 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's very good, blows away my shitty poems XD
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IINegativeII Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dont say that..
Im honored u like my poetry...but there is no "better"
jut different ways of expressing ourselves
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SolidMars Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so beautiful, i know how that feels. very well written :clap:
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IINegativeII Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u very much :)
And Im sorry that u know how it feels :/ 
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