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I've buried all the secrets of my sins
Moved on from my past...and I..haven't looked back since
But the past seems to be catching up to me
And my past troubles seem to be..something I can't flee

I'm at a standstill I can't run.
I'm forced to look back at what I've done.
There is no sun in sight. No longer can I hold on with all my might.
I'm spun in a web of darkness with the people I hurt so much.

Im surrounded by the hurt...and drowning in the hate
An so come the painful memories..that my breathing start to complicate
Im here dying alone....because I abandoned all my friends
Doctors say today I'll die....so today all of this ends

I wanna cut this web and make amends before my life ends .
I want everyone to know I didn't mean to break their heart
because of this I was alone in the dark.
So I use my last breath with all I have left
Just to say I love you all I'm sorry
Another collaboration poem with the great
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DragonEyeInfinity Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
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debidebdebdeb Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Not enough. Tell everything. Tell it all. Be honest. You will be cleansed. You will be forgiven. You will be loved. You will not be judged. You have not told me anything. You have left hints and innuendo in poems. We want the truth,spelled out so there is no mistakes or micommunications. You have the power within you to transform everything, tonight. So far, you have been unwilling,or unable to do it. Time has run out
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I...really dont know who u are..
or what u are trying to tell me...
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks <3 :)
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DevvyBearLuvsU Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
thanks.
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DevvyBearLuvsU Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
np ^-^
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks guys. I really should write something that's happy but my brain doesn't want too. LOL. I don't know why. But I think I like our other piece a little better. My brain was kinda lacking with words with this one. But thanks again guys
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My brain was lacking too >_>
I did two collabs in two days
im exhausted. lol
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL I'm not saying it was bad. I just might wait for awhile now. I saw that your other collaboration was beautiful
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