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Forgive me Father...for I have Sinned
I denied you....And let myself get lost within
Tried to pretend your blood wasn't in me
But right now it just keeps begging to be set free

It was this blood that always kept me strong
Every time a person left...it was what let me move along
Well...Maybe it's more like...I pushed them all away
Maybe this blood remembers...that every one will eventually betray

So tonight I'll let it out..and I'll follow in your steps
I'll have anything and anyone I want..just like you had always meant
Maybe that's the reason that you cursed me with this gift
Yeah..I can make anyone fall....at the price of my own heart becoming stiff

So I'll get lost in the lust..and throw the pain away
Whats the point of feeling love...if in the end nobody will stay
So let me be like you...and throw away my life, dad
Ensuring that I die alone....to prevent anyone from being sad
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:icontsukiko1516:
Tsukiko1516 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yet another great poem =^-^=
great job bro
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot :)
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Outstanding, but really quite sad.
Don't lose hope. There's people out there who will love you forever.
All this pain is hard to take, I understand.
But in the end, it'll be worth it.
Call me stupid or whatever.
But I still see light in this world.
And I've gone, and still am going through a lot.
And there's more to the world than love, man.
Adventure!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot
and i know there is more to life than just love
but meh
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I hope you're not being sarcastic when saying that.
And really. You are young. No need to rush to find the one to love forever. You will never find them by looking. Let them find you.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
u say that..like if u are older than me.
and...i wasnt being sarcastic
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Well, of course I'm not older than you. I just.... I don't know. I guess I just look at life with a brighter light. Can't help being optimistic. It's just me.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
humph
well..Im negative.
hence the name. lol
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I understand. But maybe I can help just a little.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe :)
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