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The Devil Speaks in Whispers
talking straight into my ear
In the distance Angels screaming
but their words I just can't hear
And I wish that I could make out
At least one word that they say
But it seems that once again
the Devil will have his way

Clouds wont seem to leave me
I'm always followed by the rain
my shadow seems to stalk me
And keeps whispering my name

Trying not to lose my senses
I keep myself in check
But I can feel a breath
Sliding through my neck

If I say my prayers
And just be honest with myself
will It save my soul
Or protect me from this hell
I'm starting to lose control
I can feel it everyday
Something's taking over me
The Devil will have his way

The sunlight won't come near me
Darkness takes its toll on my brain
It seems I lost my senses
All I can feel now is Pain

I know I'm insignificant
I know I'm just a Speck
Will never amount to anything
I'll always be a wreck

But I've said my prayers
And I couldn't save myself
I condemned my soul
I'm stuck here in this hell
I don't know who's in control
I've lost myself for days
He finally took over me
The Devil had his way
Newest poem
Was kinda...experimental
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh. Dark and kinda creepy. I like it. Haha. >=3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Thank u
Im really proud of this one ;P

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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha. You should be, it's very good. ^_^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
The reason for writing this poem isn't something to be proud about ;P

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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...No...? O_o *is confused*
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahah
I'll tell u the secret some day xD

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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha okay XD
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But only if you tell me one too ;P
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hm......I like this one.....the beginning was AMAZING kinda........felt.......repetitive in the middle compared to your other poems but overall I like it :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u very much
I put the most thought into the beginning :3
Im kinda proud of it..lol


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