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Today I really want to tell you...really want you to know
That everyday I'm trying..but still struggle to let you go
On a good day..I just end up feeling low
But then come the cruel nights..where the tears just want to flow

Then you appear out of thin air..and we begin to talk again
I love you so much that I just can't complain.
You come and you go..it's become a vicious chain
It just keeps driving me insane...a constant emotion keeps getting harder to sustain
When you're here I'm happy..then leave and just leave behind the pain

But I'm just so tired..of  you coming and just leaving
Of the heartache and the bleeding...
Of the nightmares..of not sleeping..
Just tired of still living.. when it hurts so much..just breathing
Love is just a fairy tale..and at that..the most deceiving

But I've opened my eyes now...so I wont fall for this
No matter how much I miss you..and just think back and reminisce
I will no longer insist...look for you and continue to persist
Tonight I swear I'll let you go...so you can go find bliss
And I will go and just keep believing..that true love just does not exist
Just a new poem
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woooooooow.....and here I am again....

Hopefully not making you miserable anymore...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha. no you're fine.
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoo. One up for me!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You've improved
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah.....have I really? I dont see it...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're not a big pain in the ass anymore lol
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhh...my dear, you're terribly mislead for I am a bigger pain in the ass than I ever was :p
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha...well you're someone else's pain in the ass now
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Photographer
I'm so proud of you :')
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Proud of me why?
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Photographer
Everytime, you manage to achive a great poem. And this one I liek A LOT! :clap:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
Im glad u do :3
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Photographer
:aww:it's hard that I don't :D
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Have you read the newest one?
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Photographer
OFC I DID!!! And I allready fav it!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
it means a lot :)
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vampie-knight-roks Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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vampie-knight-roks Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mhm
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vampie-knight-roks Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
.... Sorry.....
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can totally relete. Great flow as always.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks...glad u like it
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I always do. Your welcome. :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i know this sint my best
but..really glad u like it.
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree but yes I liked it. Hey you still do collabs? I'm not saying I wanna do one now. Just to know for later :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Yes,,i still do them.
just need for people to want to do them with me
no one ever does D:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
HEY. I do :) but Really that's surprising because I think you write pretty well. I'll let you know when my brain is happy. I'm trying to Change it up a little
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
pretty well isnt good enough for most people ;P
and..i dont write happy..
so i will suck at a happy collab
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devil-kitty3237 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
Nice work.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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devil-kitty3237 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
No Problem.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
glad u like it...
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devil-kitty3237 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
I like all of your poems... you're a good writter
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks.
im glad to hear that.
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devil-kitty3237 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
Just the truth.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I was better
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