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Whats with me?....I just can't get rid of this frown
And this sorrow keeps swimming in this liquor...and it just wont seem to drown
Proclaimed to be the King of this game...but I've seem to of lost my crown
Because every time I decide to give "Love" another shot..I keep getting shot down

Maybe Cupid is mad for all the hearts that I've Broken
Maybe his wrath is What I have awoken
Well It seems that his goal is to make sure that my heart becomes shattered
And make sure that all the pieces are scattered
Maybe that's why He wont let me have any girl that to this heart actually mattered

The one girl that I love is becoming estranged
And I'm sure it must be all because of Cupid's Revenge
Making our story be like Romeo and Juliet..must be his way to avenge
To give me a perfect girl..who easily takes away my breath
Just to realize..I can only have her..If we have a tragic death
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Cupid's Revenge by IINegativeII

/ / / ©2012-2015 IINegativeII
I just..kinda felt like writing..
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karlyfornia Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
So awesome o----o Praise your work
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :3
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decayingcherrytree Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it, hun.
...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks.
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decayingcherrytree Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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decayingcherrytree Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
C:
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:iconkedonsine:
kedonsine Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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kedonsine Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah Cupid hates me too
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:iconiinegativeii:
IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hates most of us
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:iconkedonsine:
kedonsine Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think he hates me the most :sigh:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
Who knows.
Im pretty hated.
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:iconkedonsine:
kedonsine Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm the most hated. I think it has to do with when I tried to kill him :evil:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Mmhmm.. >_>
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ErinBird Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
Lovely ! I love the word choice . :giggle:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
glad u like it
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I always love your poems
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What a coincidence...I love my poems too ;P
(total lie... i never like my poems.lol)
nah but I love ur poems too :3
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. Thank you
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your poems always make me feel so sad.
I wish you had some better luck with love...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
I wish so too D:
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Try to perk up and look into the future.
Looking for love will only hurt you.
Love will find you.
Sorry I'm always so repetitive, but I only wish to help.
And I'll do all I can to help the ones I care about.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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TheKaibutsuQueen Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No problem.
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student Photographer
GIRL WHOEVER YOU ARE, stop for a sec, take a breath and accept him!
Or else I will :D
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
WTH...
well that made me laugh a little
Im sure Ur Bf would not be happy about that. lol
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
I just wanted to put a smile on your face, he would understand that, trust me :aww:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
I dont think my Juliet is as understanding
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
:jawdrop: What do you think with that?
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
well...I also wuoldnt be that understanding if she was the one saying it to her friend. lol
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
Well she is she, I'm me :aww:
And you are my friend, idk about anything else.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
Anyway...
This is a weird topic
how are u today?
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