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I love her smile
The way her thick lips
seem to bend
the way her top lip
falls onto the bottom one
And makes the
perfect angle at the ends

I love her smile
It makes me feel content
I love the mix signals
That it sends
But why does it always feel
Like her smile is just pretend

Why do her eyes
Feel like if she's crying
There are no tears
But her expression feels like if she's lying
Did she cry
and her eye's are just now drying
She's awe inspiring
She wears a smile
But I wonder what it's hiding

Its a disguise
she's hiding it inside
I can see it in her eyes
That her smile is full of lies
She can keep on faking
Like she tries
What does she hide
She wears a mask
That I just can't despise

I wonder what she's hiding
behind that smile
I wish that she would show
every once in a while
Newest poem
Still trying new things
hope its not soo bad.
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Photographer
This one is so good.
Feels like a lot of people wears that mask sometimes. Very deep poem this time and I love it :aww:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot.
Yeah..it was a concept i liked :P
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice  :) Me like it.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Im still waiting for ur poem reply. 
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I forgot which one to reply to :c
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhh. Then never mind
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you remember which one?

If you do I'll still do it.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope.

But it's fine.
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Shadow-of-the-Wolves Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great! Nicely done, a good theme to write about, I like this "experiement" of yours. :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Well thank u very much :)
i'm glad people seem to like it :3 
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Lazybunnyluv Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
woot woot good stuff son
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks love.
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Lazybunnyluv Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
mulalala
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mulala?
What does that mean
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
Aw, it goes from this sort of happy feeling to sadness...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah....I try writing happy...but u know i MUST go sad lol
its my thing 

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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Writer
:D Well, it would explain your username.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
indeed :)
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ You finished it! It's really great too!
Two thumbs up for you! =3
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah..
I got some inspiration...
Thanks :)
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LongingForFlame Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^_^ Haha.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah..
thanks again 
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SobDontCry Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sometimes I wonder hoe you come up with this wonderful poems, this is really good and sweet c:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Humph.
I write about what i feel..or wonder about?
i dont know..lol
they just come to me xD

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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Aww that is so sweet!!!!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Is it really?

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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
yes!!! :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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