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We stumbled on to something
without trying to seek it
But now that we have it
We're trying to keep it a secret

So when everyone's around
We try so hard not to make a sound
Our heads are lowered
We keep looking forward
To not look into each other's eyes

We try to act like strangers
To keep ourselves from dangers
Try not to grab attention
Don't need anyone to mention
That this facade is full of lies

Don't want to be a topic
People would like to discuss
No need for conversations
People talking about us

Holding this emotion back
Until it overflows and pours
You and I will always be
A love that exists only behind closed doors
Newest poem
Sorry if it doesnt live up to the expectations of everyone..since my last poem...was so successful.
its hard to write something...that i think people would also enjoy
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Secrets don't make it fun.

It makes it hard when it becomes reality and public and it's a mess -.-;
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
it mkes it fun
there is a type of excitement..of keeping it hidden 

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If you -can- keep it hidden.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can
Im a secretive person 
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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh. Hardly.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
u dont think Im secretive?

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CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nahhhhhhhh not really.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why not?
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TheLionAndTheFish Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Very interesting, a love that's supposed to be secret...

But Manny, you shouldn't worry too much; of course, not every poem is a masterpiece, but I think you're an amazing poet and you shouldn't worry whether or not your work live up to expectations.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Secret makes it all that more interesting ;P
and fun...lol

And Yes i know :/
But..After having a poem that did so well...I felt like i poured too much into it..that i lost all creativity for words..
and i had to sort of force this poem out.
But then..i feel like i got more inspiration by the next poem. "Yesterday" :)
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