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Please tell me you hate me
Because I hate me too
Tell me you wish that I would die
For all I've put you through

Please tell me that my lips didn't mean anything
Tell me that you don't love me
From all these hurtful things
Why does it hurt the most.. When you say sorry

Please go ahead and make me out to be
The bad guy of the story
Or pretend that you don't
Know me.
Just do anything that helps
To set you free

And I'll pretend that I'm not lonely
Act like I'm the bad guy only
I'll play any role because
I don't want you to be suffering
Like me
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Bad Guy by IINegativeII

/ / / ©2014-2015 IINegativeII
I dont write as often as i would like
i dont have ideas as often as i would like
and im not as good as i would like.

but if anyone out there still cares about my writing....here is a new piece.
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:icondevil-s-fallen-angel:
devil-s-fallen-angel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're far from being a bad guy -.- 

Hug 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffft. How would you know?
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devil-s-fallen-angel Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Because I know you :) That is how I know.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft. Just barely :P
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devil-s-fallen-angel Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
pshhhhhh well enough :happybounce: 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If you say so then
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devil-s-fallen-angel Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course I say so. And I believe it with everything I am :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft u are just weird then!
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vampie-knight-roks Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This.Is absolutely amazing. And.. it reminds me of something someone would say to me. I... Yeah. It's amazing. You hsould keep writing when you have time. It's really good.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. That means a lot
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vampie-knight-roks Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very much welcome.
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DevvyBearLuvsU Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I DOOOO
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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monochromera Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
;_; you really have a way of getting the feelings across in a poem. this one is so touching, my goodness.. I just want to be like "no, don't be lonely! there's others out there who know you're not the bad guy!" :C beautiful, but sad
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha.
Thank you very much.
I'm not as confident about my writing as I used to be.
But thank you.
Every girl that knows me know I'm the bad guy though
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monochromera Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014

no prob~

and why? you've got talent D:

I don't see you as a bad guy. silly girls will be silly.

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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha.
Well thank you.
But you barely know me.
:(
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monochromera Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014

that's a good point >3>

but bad guys aren't so polite XD

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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm a bad guy... Not a rude one lol
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monochromera Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
I s'pose there can be a difference XD I tend to think if one is rude then they must be the bad guy. but there can be a polite villain
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha.. The biggest mistake is to think all of us are the same.
And I like that term.. Polite villain. I might use that as my name lol

But yeah. Sigh... how about you just marry me and save me the heartache? Lol
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the first four lines. Great job. 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
I wasn't sure about the beginning of this poem
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think its perfect. ^^
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're too nice to me c:
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
But you deserve it. 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha.. well thank you
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course. 
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd hug you if there wasn't this screen and hundreds of miles between us lol
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Shadow-of-the-Wolves Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful poem! Oh this brings back so so many memories...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much.
I'm glad you liked it!

Memories like what?
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Shadow-of-the-Wolves Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! *hug*

Well, they're memories of a relationship I'm trying hard to forget. It's very very complicated (everything seems to be like that doesn't it)~
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Forgetting and moving on is the hardest. :/
I'm sorry you had to go through something similar
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
I really love this piece. It's raw and emotional.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
And welcome back
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Where'd you disappear to?
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Writer
Midterm studying. So much midterm studying.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eewww. That sucks lol
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Writer
Thankfully, it's all over with so that's good~
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I forgot the typical to this lol
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