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I woke up in the middle of the night,
I was alone, moved searching for the light.
I grabbed my phone and had the screen shining
Bright. Then I noticed a note in the form of a text,
saying that you'd left to get back with your Ex.

What happened next I can't recall except I
Threw my phone against the wall. It
Shattered like you shattered my heart,
Now I'm alone, alone in the dark.

Turned my hand to a fist and started
Punching the floor and though I felt
The bones breaking, I kept punching it more.
Because nothing hurts more then this
Heart you just tore. How dare you just
Leave and go back to him, is this how you
Repay me, leaving like that in a whim?

You have questions I just have one answer,
You could have treated me better. After awhile
The loving embrace took its toll, I felt like you
Left me cold. So I sold my key. Let me be, I'll
just leave you with my memory.

But don't you forget everything that he did.
Yeah I know you'll regret It and wind up
feeling stupid. Did you suddenly forget that
He has that woman a kid? I don't know what
you thought could have possibly changed, but
I could feel everyday, you were getting estranged.


Your untitled to your opinion. Just like I am to mine
Maybe your right I'm crossing the line. Playing
With fire is what I desire. If I get burned it's a
Lesson learned. Never go back to an Ex.
Collaboration poem with :iconcuddleslut17:
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Carlson-art Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
Wow...
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that a good wow?
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Carlson-art Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
Yes! :P This is really good
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
means a lot
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Carlson-art Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
You're welcome! This is amazing!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well..I didnt write it alone..so i cant take all the credit.
but..if u really like it..u can always look at the rest of my gallery :)
If u want. no pressure
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Carlson-art Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
Haha I will! :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool :)
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Photographer
You two are perfect together, can't wait for more! :aww:
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
She's married ;P
lol
Im joking..i know what u mean. lol
thanks :)
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sunnySIDEofME Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Yeah I know, but reading our works outloud it is, perfection!
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks,..
glad u like it
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ultimate1001 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
very powerful and moving. i don't share the situation portrayed but its so very true.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont share it either...lol
We just wrote it :)
Thanks.
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think this has to be the longest piece we did. But I like how it came out. Your 2nd stanza I absolutely love. Thanks for writing with me. :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
And u are welcome :)
thanks or writing with me again
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome i always have fun writing with you.

As soon as you wrote back with your Ex I totally knew where I was going with it lol :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
this didnt happen to me.
I actually came up with it..right before i went to sleep
i always think of rhymes before sleeping
so i wrote the whole first paragraph..then crashed out. lol


but,,,im glad it made it easier for u :)
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