Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

:iconiinegativeii: More from IINegativeII


Featured in Collections

Poetry by Argentum-Lupae-Luna

Great literature by SoldiersWolf


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
June 8, 2013
File Size
1.3 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
312
Favourites
18 (who?)
Comments
35
×
I swear I still remember
the rhythm of your heart
I remember all your features
under the moon in the dark
I swear I'll remember it all
Its all engraved in my heart
Right from the start...
Until it all fell apart

I'm sorry, love...about this mess
It should've never been so painful
Or leave us fucking depressed
I know it hurts, what I confessed
It's better that you know the truth
I had to get it all off of my chest

I'm afraid...there's nothing left to save
The guilt was starting to consume me
It was starting to enslave
And I just can't...pretend I'm brave
I'm sorry that I've lost you
But I just couldn't take this to my grave

And I know...that its not enough
That I brought it all upon myself
Made It hurts so fucking much
Our love is dead, I lost your trust
Every apology feels like it cuts
But I'm sorry....even if sorry's not enough

I've had no sleep...in all these months
Your voice haunts me in the night
And all I dream about is us
It might be cheap..It might be tough
But can I ask to hear you say you love me
I need to hear it once
newest poem thingy
not my best as u will all come to realize
but its been a while
so i hope u enjoy
Add a Comment:
 
:iconcanuspellmyname:
CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So. Many. F. Bombs -.- *akes your hand and lightly smacks it again* Bad Manny! BAD!!!! >.<
Reply
:iconiinegativeii:
IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhh...yeah
Im sorry about my language :c 
Reply
:iconcanuspellmyname:
CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Better be, damn it! lol :D
Reply
:iconiinegativeii:
IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You'll be more mad when u read the other one...

Reply
:iconcanuspellmyname:
CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't plan on it........
Reply
:iconiinegativeii:
IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
U already read it..lol

Reply
:iconcanuspellmyname:
CanUSpellMyName Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The F love one? No I didn't...
Reply
:iconiinegativeii:
IINegativeII Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
boo
Read it!

Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconwhyneful:
whyneful Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg! is this written for me? i so can relate...
Reply
:iconiinegativeii:
IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
Well i can pretend it was written for u if u'd like ;P
Reply
Add a Comment: