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Dear God

I'm looking at the sky....and I wonder if you're there
I'm tired..lost..completely broken...and I wonder if you care
I'll admit....I've always doubted if you're real
But I'm here praying to the heavens....you can take away the pain I feel

But..its not just me..I see suffering everywhere
People who just dream of dying..who wish that you'd be there
And these people are so nice...they're like Angels from the earth
But everyday they hurt so much..they wish their parents had never given birth

See God, that I just can't understand
Where are you when all these people need a helping hand
Everywhere.I see..just the good people getting hurt
Everyday asking for a grave...for their hearts are already buried in the dirt

And the people filled with greed....why do they succeed
When all these angels hurt themselves...watching themselves bleed
I'll be here....everyday.. praying to you, God
Hoping that you'll help the angels...from being buried in the sod

And even though I'm not an angel..I hope you can help me too
I know I don't deserve it....for always doubting you
But If you're really all forgiving...then please take the pain away
Because God I'm here now doubting....If I'll get to see another day
As many people may..or may not know...I'm an Atheist..
but..today..I was talking to someone...who...is really..just an Angel...and i can't stand how much she has gone through.
It helped inspire this poem
sorry....If it...offends anyone.
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Kenzie-Segal Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ur sooo sweet :) thank u sooo much and yes it made me cry :heart: I'm happy i was the inspiration
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It made u cry D:
that doesnt...really..make me feel good about it >_>
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Kenzie-Segal Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
in a good way geez :)
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well.Im glad u like it :)
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cute! im not anything, considering im planning on studying religions (non-bais) and i already know a bunch. this was pretty, and im sure my gma would LOVE it.
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ermm
thanks :)
I Hope she does love it.
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, i didnt show her it
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh
then nvm XD lol
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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IINegativeII Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah..lol
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